This was great. I love the image of rain you kept using throughout. I've done that myself and it works very well as a metaphor and for setting the mood.

Thanks for posting smile .

Fanfic | MVs

Clark: "Lois? She's bossy. She's stuck up, she's rude... I can't stand her."
Lana: "The best ones always start that way."

"And you already know. Yeah, you already know how this will end." - DeVotchKa