This was absolutely beautiful! This was definitely a creative take on HOL/BatP. There were so many emotions here. I love that in spite of what happened with Lois and Lex, she allowed Clark into her heart.
Initially, I thought that Martha knew that Clark was visiting Lois. In fact I thought that she pushed it up. But...nevertheless, regardless of how it happened, it happened.
I wondered if Clark knew who Lois was. I wondered if reading Clark's articles would make Lois realize who he was, if maybe a picture was enclosed in one of them. And it was really funny that he had the scoop on the Daily Planet, as if he knew that Lois would want that information.
This was very well done and I thoroughly enjoyed it. So you went out on a limb... It worked for you!
Brava!
~Sheila
