I also want to say how sorry I am for your loss. My Grandmother died the day after Christmas when I was young. I was too young to remember much about it, but I do know that it was very hard on my family. I wish you all the best and hope that you guys can find some happiness this holiday season.
As for the story, I have to say that my first thought was "Yes! Lois is finally going to learn the truth!"
Lois caught up to Star and grabbed her arm to catch her attention. “What do you mean by 'marriage and commitment'?”
Babble all you want, Star. We won't mind!
Psst! Don't forget the journal, Lois.
What a cliffhanger you left us with! I can't wait for the next part!
