Your husband and you have been in my family's thoughts and prayers. My condolences.
I love the glimpse you give us of Clark's soul at the restaurant. He's trying so hard to protect himself, but just can't say no to Lois.
I also love the remembrance box. We never saw Lois appreciate the roses on the show. Nice touch. And the night in the clouds was worth following up with a little token, as well.
I would love to see a little of that last scene from Clark's eyes. You write Clark wrestling with himself so well. I would love to see how Clark talks himself into allowing himself to comfort her like that. Face it, he comforted her when they were just friends. Right?
Elisabeth
