That's neat how you included that type of sentence. Like a comic book. It makes it very colourful for me as the image of the yellow bar or area in a picture of a comic book. Sorry, I don't know comic book jargon.
yay! I'm glad you think it makes it sound like a comic book, because that's exactly why I did that. (and don't worry, I don't know comic book jargon either. Well, actually, I do in French... for all the good that'll do me over here. LOL)
I guess the Jimmy comment was from the show, but I like how you inserted it. If I'm wrong about it coming from the show...it's still cool.
He does make a similar comment on the show, but some of what I had him say is actually closer to what Clark says in that scene. Of course in my story, Clark's not in the newsroom at the time, so...
(notice I left Cat out as well... this, however, I had not actually realized until now. Oh hum... sorry Cat, maybe next time!)
