As Another_Anna said,
Now you have to post the rest soon, cause even us lurkers are posting!! I was going to type some comments, but I would have just ended up repeating everything Paul said. So I'll just say "ditto" to his post.
I would tell you to PLEASE post Part II, but Annette said it so much better, so "ditto" to her, too!
I like this story very much.
Vicki