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Posted By: RL Comments - Fact or Ficus, Part 1/3 - 06/12/03 10:14 AM
Wow, Meredith. Great start on a story. I must have missed it on Zoomway's board when you first posted it. You left all these people hanging on that ending for all this time? That was cruel. wink

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"How could he? He always seemed so caring - so trustworthy! Yet he's been keeping this hidden all along?" By this time she had risen to her feet again, a militant light in her eyes. "Boy, when I get hold of him, is he ever gonna regret this...!"
Guess we'll have to find out just what this is all about.

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When he'd finally taken his leave, his eyes had flickered briefly to her mouth, and for a dizzying second she'd thought he might kiss her. But if the idea had crossed his mind, he'd evidently thought better of it, because with no more than a friendly clasp of her shoulder and a soft "Merry Christmas", he'd turned and walked away down the hall.

Unfortunately for Lois, she'd been able to think of little else all night. In that brief second she'd realised how badly she wanted him to kiss her. She'd nearly called after him, but as usual, her nerve had failed her. She'd only ever mustered the courage once to tell Clark how she felt about him, and he'd slept through it... doing it again seemed twice as scary. And what if she was only imagining Clark's attraction towards her - projecting her own feelings onto him? She'd never recover from the embarrassment, and it might ruin their friendship for ever.
These two really have a unique talent for making assumptions about the other, not able to believe the other could possibly love him/her. But hey, I think that just makes their relationship that much more special when they did/do get together.
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"Sure am!" She smiled warmly at him and, without thinking, blurted out, "I missed you."

His eyes flew to hers, and his coffee mug tilted dangerously for a moment. There was a breathless silence, while Lois berated herself internally; then, just as she'd decided to break the awkward pause by asking what they were meant to be working on, Clark put down his mug and reached out to lay a gentle hand on her arm. The startlement in his eyes had changed to pleasure, and something warmer... something that made Lois feel tingly all over, from head to toe. "I missed you, too," he said simply.
This was sweet. Too bad we didn't get to see this from Clark's POV.
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Perry wants me in Europe, to report on Secretary Wallace's trade negotiations. Van Heerden broke his leg skiing over the weekend, and they can't find anyone to replace him at such short notice. I'm flying to Brussels this afternoon.
Aaarrrggghhhhh!!!!! grumble

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"I don't like flying," Clark said abruptly, cutting short her fanciful thoughts. Of course, he hadn't been thinking about her that way at all. The admission must have cost him something, though. Clark never went out of his way to appear macho, but from the whiteness of his knuckles and the glimpse she caught of the sheen on his forehead as she checked her mirror, this was no mild dislike. If she hadn't known better, she'd have thought he was terrified.
Something tells me this isn't quite what he was nervous about. At least, here's to hoping. :p
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His lips brushed across hers, and for a moment she feared that he would pull away; then her eyes fluttered closed as his warm mouth covered hers, his lips pressing softly against hers for a blissful moment. Then he was straightening, his hand coming up to cup her cheek gently.

"Goodbye, Lois," he said, sounding as breathless as she felt. "I'll... I'll call you."

"Goodbye, Clark," she responded, wishing she could express her feelings instead of mouthing platitudes. "Travel safely." And come back to me quickly, she added, not quite getting up the nerve to say it aloud.
This part is just great. It's kind of heartbreaking that they both are left hanging, almost sure that the other cares for him/her romantically. Two weeks!?! There's always the telephone, but it's not quite the same. thumbsup
I really loved this Lois introspection and the L&C scenes....and as for teasing cliffhanger at the beginning eek
More very soon please!!

HC wave
Posted By: KathyM Re: Comments - Fact or Ficus, Part 1/3 - 06/12/03 10:27 AM
I've had little time for the boards lately, but was glad to come back today and see you reposting this, Meredith. I hope the next parts follow swiftly!

I love this, Clark almost spilling his coffee when Lois said she missed him, Lois putting her perfume on the pillow so that he wouldn't be thinking about blonde stewardesses, and, of course, the kiss. Just lovely...
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She met his eyes, and saw that they had turned serious. The emotion there made her heart beat suddenly faster. "Thanks... for everything," he said huskily.

Ever so slowly, he bent towards her. His eyes flickered downwards, and Lois knew this time he was going to kiss her goodbye; but he was giving her the opportunity to turn her head slightly and present her cheek if she wanted to. Instead, she turned her face up to his and waited.

His lips brushed across hers, and for a moment she feared that he would pull away; then her eyes fluttered closed as his warm mouth covered hers, his lips pressing softly against hers for a blissful moment. Then he was straightening, his hand coming up to cup her cheek gently.

"Goodbye, Lois," he said, sounding as breathless as she felt. "I'll... I'll call you."
Obviously I'm as curious as everyone else to know just what Lois found in Clark's apartment. Unfortunately, it looks like she's temporarily forgotten some of these feelings of love that have washed over her in recent days...

And I do have a question. Since Clark had to give Lois his keys...If "Superman" had to drop by Clark's apartment while Clark was in Europe (to shower after a rescue, or pick up an extra Suit, for example), has it ever been established in fanfic that he leaves his balcony door unlocked, or would he have to break in? Just curious... smile

KathyM
Posted By: LabRat Re: Comments - Fact or Ficus, Part 1/3 - 06/12/03 10:48 AM
Woohooo!!!! mecry This was such a beautifully waffy moment - one among many. But - bad Perry! <g>

I loved the flying conversation. Poor Clark though!

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"My keys? You're going to water them?" It was his turn for incredulity. "But Lois, you and plants..." She turned a withering glare on him. "Lois, be reasonable! There's been a steady procession of plants over your desk in the year and a half I've known you, and not one of them has left alive!"
rotflol

Post part two soon - desperate once again to know just what Lois found under that ficus. wink

LabRat smile
Posted By: Shadow Re: Comments - Fact or Ficus, Part 1/3 - 06/12/03 10:52 AM
Oh yippee! I'd completely missed this story the first time around so I'm glad you reposted it here.

Club Smoochie commences! (AND there's a ficus tree!)
Keep it coming
Jen hyper
Posted By: ChiefPam Re: Comments - Fact or Ficus, Part 1/3 - 06/12/03 01:23 PM
Thanks for the repost, Meredith, now give us part 2!!!

This was really sweet, with Lois gradually admitting things to herself. They have such obscure conversations with each other! <g> "I'll water your plants" really means "kiss me!" etc. But it seems to be working for them, mostly...

And I'm certain that Lois is upset at Clark having killed the ficus, neglecting it as soon as he got it. Shame on him!

PJ wink
Posted By: rivka Re: Comments - Fact or Ficus, Part 1/3 - 06/12/03 01:36 PM
Well, since I'm fairly new I never saw this originally, so thanks for reposting it. smile

This is great! Now... I hear there's a part 2...? dizzy rotflol

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And come back to me quickly, she added, not quite getting up the nerve to say it aloud.
awwww, waffy!

MORE! pretty please?
Posted By: merry Re: Comments - Fact or Ficus, Part 1/3 - 06/12/03 01:49 PM
Meredith,
glad you've finished this
thanks for the repost
now post the rest
merry
Posted By: mariadferdez. Re: Comments - Fact or Ficus, Part 1/3 - 06/12/03 03:15 PM
Hi,

Great part. smile1 Lets see the next part, where Lois kill the ficus. smile1
Posted By: Tank Re: Comments - Fact or Ficus, Part 1/3 - 06/12/03 03:22 PM
Good opening instalment. You've given us a teaser of things to come, then went back and established the current 'relationship' and the thoughts of our beautiful, confused reporter.

3 parts? That means there's plenty of space for a couple of good whams before the end. Let's hope we get to see them soon.

I really like that this is from Lois' pov. We have way to much Clark pov on these boards. wink

Tank (who thinks that maybe there is even enough story for Lois to get a haircut too, after all, she will be bored while Clark is away, and just might want to surprise him)
Posted By: ANOTHER_ANNA Re: Comments - Fact or Ficus, Part 1/3 - 06/12/03 07:51 PM
Yeah Fact or Ficus!!! dance

I had given up on it. I'm so excited that you've finished!

Anna

Now you have to post the rest soon, cause even us lurkers are posting!! wink
Posted By: Melisa Re: Comments - Fact or Ficus, Part 1/3 - 06/12/03 10:58 PM
I remember when this was first posted and I was very into to the story and disappointed that the rest of it wasn't posted. I'm glad to see it back up and I can't wait for the next installments. Thanks for continuing.
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Melisa
Posted By: AnnieM Re: Comments - Fact or Ficus, Part 1/3 - 06/13/03 03:05 AM
Well, everyone's already quoted my favorite parts, so I'll just have to settle for saying my piece this time, and making sure I'm one of the first next time, so I can paste in all the parts I like best.

All I can say is...I'm REALLY glad I didn't read this the first time around. I remember when you posted it I was terribly busy and didn't have the time to read anything, but I actually made a note to myself to read it asap. And then you started struggling with the ending, and I decided just to leave it until you were finished. Thank god. Because if had read this, and then didn't get to read the rest of it for months...I think I might have died of frustration. <G>

It was really wonderful. The description of Lois waiting for Clark to enter the newsroom - and her realization of how smitten she was - made my heart lurch for her. I know exactly how she feels, and I can empathize with her nerves. And then, just when she's started to get things figured out, Perry sends Clark to the other side of the world! Their conversation was just precious. It was funny to hear her being indignant, but it was also really sweet because we knew what they were both thinking. And then the trip to the airport - Lois dragging things out as long as she possibly can. Poor Clark, scared of flying. And then the kiss...sigh. It's perfect. Or, rather, it would be if he wasn't getting on a plane and heading for a far off land minutes later. Of course, he could be back in Metropolis in the blink of an eye...but Lois doesn't know that. And he can't be there as Clark.

I can't wait to see what happens next. smile

Annie (who's off - finally - to bed, hoping for sweet ficus dreams <G>)
Posted By: TriciaW Re: Comments - Fact or Ficus, Part 1/3 - 06/13/03 03:40 AM
Thanks for reposting, Meredith! smile1

I love this. Superbly written! dizzy
Please post the next part soon. wildguy

Tricia cool
Posted By: Saskia Re: Comments - Fact or Ficus, Part 1/3 - 06/13/03 09:48 AM
Yay!! Mere's finally finished FoF! dance

It's still as wonderful as I remember it. There's only one thing missing right now, and that's part 2!!

It's about time for part 2! laugh

Saskia
Posted By: amciotola Re: Comments - Fact or Ficus, Part 1/3 - 06/13/03 10:22 AM
HUMPH!!!! You would think that since this was a refresher post, part two would have immedeately followed.

/me holds the comments hostage.

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Posted By: HatMan Re: Comments - Fact or Ficus, Part 1/3 - 06/13/03 12:47 PM
sorry, annette. you may be top woman on the boards totem pole, but even you can't hold a comments thread hostage.

mere, this was great. i read it the first time around, but my memory is fuzzy enough that it seemed new this time. laugh

you've done such a good job with this. sweet and waffy and romantic and all, but with those lovely little humorous details, like clark's taking the stairs. nice touch with him being afraid of the plane, too. oh, and good use of his language skills.

and this...

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Superman water your plants?" She stared at him incredulously. She had a sudden mental image of the superhero walking solemnly around Clark's apartment with a little plastic watering can, but she suppressed the wild laughter that threatened to bubble out of her. "Clark, Superman has much better things to do. Come on, give me your keys."
poor clark, though. as if he wasn't going to be nuts enough sitting in a plane, now his super nose has to live with a constant subtle reminder of lois.

good to see the ficus, too. great title, btw. smile

looking forward to seeing the next part and playing "count the birthdays." smile

Paul
Posted By: Kaethel Re: Comments - Fact or Ficus, Part 1/3 - 06/13/03 12:55 PM
What Annette said!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! evil
Posted By: Meni Re: Comments - Fact or Ficus, Part 1/3 - 06/13/03 01:18 PM
Hey Meredith

It was a great part... thanks foe the repost...

Now where is part 2???

Waiting sad
Posted By: Vicki Re: Comments - Fact or Ficus, Part 1/3 - 06/13/03 03:18 PM
As Another_Anna said,

Now you have to post the rest soon, cause even us lurkers are posting!!

I was going to type some comments, but I would have just ended up repeating everything Paul said. So I'll just say "ditto" to his post.

I would tell you to PLEASE post Part II, but Annette said it so much better, so "ditto" to her, too!

I like this story very much.

Vicki wave
Posted By: klairl Re: Comments - Fact or Ficus, Part 1/3 - 06/13/03 05:27 PM
Perry: Lois, what happened to that mood piece I gave you--the razing of that old theatre on Forty-second?
Lois: I wasn't in the mood.

So glad you were finally in the mood, Meredith, and that my return coincides with this.
Looking forward to more,
claire
Posted By: Meredith Re: Comments - Fact or Ficus, Part 1/3 - 06/14/03 03:56 AM
Wow! I wasn't expecting so many comments on a repost! smile It's wonderful to have so many readers, both "old" (i.e. disappointed from a few months ago) and new, excited about the story!

The teaser got a number of people wondering:
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Guess we'll have to find out just what this is all about.

and as for teasing cliffhanger at the beginning [Eek!]

Obviously I'm as curious as everyone else to know just what Lois found in Clark's apartment.

desperate once again to know just what Lois found under that ficus.

I can't wait to find out what Lois found. [Dizzy]
Fortunately, you won't have much longer to wait...

Some people had predictions:
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Lets see the next part, where Lois kill the ficus. [Rotflol]
LOL, Maria! You don't trust Lois any more than Clark does, hmm? We'll have to see if your opinion is justified...

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And I'm certain that Lois is upset at Clark having killed the ficus, neglecting it as soon as he got it. Shame on him!
No comment, Pam. <g>

There were lots of quotes of favourite bits, which are very useful as well as flattering. blush Reluctantly, though, I have to pass on the kudos for the image of Superman with a little watering can to KathyB. dizzy Well, this time Tank loses out. Tank, for Lois's pov and haircut, you can always go and re-read Image. wink

KathyM has a question:
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Since Clark had to give Lois his keys...If "Superman" had to drop by Clark's apartment while Clark was in Europe (to shower after a rescue, or pick up an extra Suit, for example), has it ever been established in fanfic that he leaves his balcony door unlocked, or would he have to break in? Just curious...
Well, you'll see my take on it shortly. smile I'd just like to add that many fanfics have also had Clark stashing a spare front door key somewhere astoundingly obvious, like under the doormat or over the lintel.

There's one more thing everyone seems to agree on...
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More soon!
More very soon please!!
I hope the next parts follow swiftly!
Thanks for the repost, Meredith, now give us part 2!!!
This is great! Now... I hear there's a part 2...? [Wildguy]
Now you have to post the rest soon, cause even us lurkers are posting!! [Wink]
Please post the next part soon. [Wildguy]
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What Annette said!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [Wildguy] [Wildguy] [Wildguy] [Wildguy] [Wildguy]
*Gulp!* Well, I'm delighted to have drawn a couple of lurkers out of the woodwork (welcome, Another_Anna and Another Vicki!) But, if you'll excuse me... I think there's, um, something I need to do right now, before the disembowelling shears come out...

Mere
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