Your version of that strained episode is so much better than the original! Clark is a lot more supportive of his wife's new role and Roy saying good-night to both of them was a fun touch.
Next part?
Morgana
A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.
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