Awww--this was really, really great clap clap clap!

I loved the feel of the piece. So nice, relaxed. A quiet, wonderful night at home. The dialogue between everyone was really spot on, too, by the way.

I've got to agree...I've always also really enjoyed when Martha (and even Jonathan) get involved with Clark's love life smile. And I think they are on the right track--by setting up a situation where it's away from work, work friends...by having a get-together where Lois only knows Clark, where she's not in a work environment, and where other couples are around, would be great for their friendship. Oh--and Jonathan is onto something, too. If Clark is worried about Lois getting closer to Superman, he really does need to put some distance between them. It makes a lot of sense, and is a lot less confusing (for both of them).

Great job!
Laura

Last edited by LMA; 08/26/16 04:34 PM.

"Where's Clark?" "Right here."

...two simple sentences--with so much meaning.

~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~