Read this over lunch and nearly cried into my chicken and broccoli. As you said in your last feedback to my feedback - Poor Clark!

And poor Lois too! So trapped. So unhappy with what she (so stupidly) got involved with.

I'm wondering about the next couple of weeks that she bought herself. Will she try to warn Clark? Will she do something to make him back off on his affections?

And the mystery villain! You are KILLING me! Others have mentioned a future Clark, but I'm not buying that. All the Miss Lane stuff makes me think perhaps it is Wells. I also had thoughts of Jor-El. Tempus is still on my radar too. Maybe some future member of the Justice League? Like the Flash appearing in Batman's dream in BvS?

Great work. You have me teetering on the edge of my seat here. Update soon please! laugh


Battle On,
Deadly Chakram

"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent

"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon