Reading all of the feedback for this part just leaves me with more questions! What it reinforces, though, is how good this story already is. The mystery of the plot combined with the flawless execution of your writing style makes me crave more. Please post again...I need to know what's going on! grovel


You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie. wink