Yes, finally someone who picked up The Incredibles! YAAAAY!
Ahem. Sorry. But I've been dying to see something like this for years. So, kudos for that alone.
Of course, the way you had Clark and his boys watch the movie, then have all of Clark's fears about his own secret identity being found out shown in introspection - it was a fabulous ride. Not to mention that your use of movie scenes was spot on.
