Honestly, I really enjoyed this chapter...a LOT. The banter was so much them...that playful back and forth that is so fun to read. I love how that even though so much of the situation is different, you managed to find 'that' element, and really make it sing out. They get along so well, play off each other in such an amazing way. You can see the friendship in their relationship. You've done a spectacular job of finding their souls, connecting L&C into this really unique story
Laura, thank you so much! That means a great deal to me!
I know what you mean about "'that' element" because it was what kept me going back to the show week after week despite clones, frogs, stupid villains and "smart" kids.<g> There was just something special about those two and I've loved thinking and writing about them, and "it" ever since.
The happier I see them, the more in love they are falling, the more nervous I get for life to return to normal. They won't be able to hide the love that shines so clearly in their eyes, I'm afraid...
You're right, their idyll cannot last forever, unfortunately. We'll just have to see what happens. ;-)
Thanks again for the great feedback!
