Because there are only 16 chapters left! You don't want this to end too soon, do you?
I suppose I could post the rest of them and then put you all on your honor to read just one a day? ;-)
Seriously, tho, that's a lovely compliment ... thank you!
P.S.: Love their banter! Very Loisandclark-ish
I had the Honeymoon in Metropolis game-playing sequence in mind when I wrote the card game scene. Thanks for making that connection back to LNC.
...I love how you have characterized Lavinia: she's sweeter than canon Lois, which I personally appreciate
I appreciate you telling me that. I wanted to try and express the essences of each of their souls, but to leave out or at least temper any personality traits that might really stem from nurture and not nature. Since they are living in different times, their upbringing and experiences would be completely different from the pair we met on the show. Lois' soul in my story was lucky enough to have a father who dotes upon her and is proud of her, even if he's a bit absent-minded at times. Bernard would never say, "that leaves two points for improvement." :-)
