Sad, emotional, bittersweet. SO heartfelt. Wow--can I borrow a tissue, HiddenMoon? mecry

I really enjoyed this piece, KK. I am definitely more of the 'happily ever after' type--hence, Ken's ending does have great appeal clap--BUT...I agree with your final choice. Overall, I think how the story reads now would be my preference.

I come away from reading with such a feeling of missed opportunity. So much time with everything left unspoken. Two heartbroken people, blinded by all of the chances they never took. It was very easy to feel the loneliness of their lives--and the regret.

Lois' letter gave Clark (or I guess Superman) a link to reality. I'm so glad that he knows the truth about how Lois had always felt. He can now live the rest of his life knowing that she loved him as much as he will continue to love her. There's pain in knowing that, I know, but there's also so much value.

Very much loved the story, KK. Wonderful job notworthy .
Laura


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"Where's Clark?" "Right here."

...two simple sentences--with so much meaning.

~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~