Like others, I don't play video games, but was easily able to follow along with the story anyway. 15 years?! How sad that they disconnected for so long. The emotion in this story was spot-on - it was both believable and heartfelt. Brava - well done!
You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie.
How sad that they disconnected for so long. 
The emotion in this story was spot-on - it was both believable and heartfelt. Brava - well done! 
