Each chapter seems more interesting than the previous one, the art of peeling the onion.
I am wondering just when he will reveal his origins to Lois, the day they spent in his room would have seemed to be the most opportune time. I mean they are about to attempt a feat that it is highly likely that neither of them will survive and he is still concerned about the secret?
I like Virginia read and re-read that passage about his work and still could not figure out what you were trying to convey
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Next chapter please...
Mike