Originally Posted by Morgana
This segment packed an emotional wallop!
Definitely. It's one of the more serious chapters in this light-hearted tale.

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Lois 'flash of life' was very revealing. Who was she thinking of more than anyone else but Clark.
Oh yes. No-one else commented on the fact that Clark was there twice ... and that his name was linked with 'home'

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Nice touch adding the Green Lantern in there, my DC comics memory is very rusty, but I do remember they worked well together.
*Nods* As I said at the start, this story does take place in the wider DC universe, but you don't see that much and don't need to know that much of it.

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I will try to be more consistent in writing my comments, in the meantime, keep the parts coming! wave
Thanks. Any comments are welcome. More parts coming up.


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Lois: "You put up with me for the same reason I put up with you. It's because I'm completely in love with you."
Clark: "And I love you ... Did we just make up?"
Lois: "I think so."