This segment packed an emotional wallop!

Lois 'flash of life' was very revealing. Who was she thinking of more than anyone else but Clark.

Nice touch adding the Green Lantern in there, my DC comics memory is very rusty, but I do remember they worked well together.

I will try to be more consistent in writing my comments, in the meantime, keep the parts coming! wave

Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.