Let's see:

1. Clark knows that Lois loves him--check! clap
2. Lois now knows that Clark loves her--check! hyper
3. Lois knows that Clark Kent = Superman--check! dance

--and, awesomely...

4. Kissing! party Kissing! party And some more kissing! party

So yes, loved this part, KK love

I very much enjoyed both reveals--the discovery of mutual love, and everything Superman-related. It felt great having Lois be 'in' on discovering who Superman was. I really liked how they talked through it, how Lois was able to figure it out by being open to all that Clark really is as a whole. And yes, I was definitely squealing my way through their discovery of how they both feel towards each other. Such WAFFy goodness notworthy. It was very romantic, and especially loved how Clark got her attention by kissing her. I really enjoyed how you wrote those moments of discovery--of their love for each other--out between them. Very sweet smile.

Oh--and lastly...cool title for this chapter! hail Gotta admit, you had me squealing with delight at reading it (before I had even opened the chapter up).

Looking forward to more--great job!
Laura

Last edited by LMA; 08/21/14 01:29 AM.

"Where's Clark?" "Right here."

...two simple sentences--with so much meaning.

~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~