I'll be all dialogue dialogue dialogue back and forth, and then it's like, okay wait. Lois has to get her jacket, and Clark needs to shut to door behind him, and then they have to both get in the car, but wait Lois should really start the car, and and...can't we just get back to the interesting stuff already?
LOL. This reminds of a story I was writing many years ago. I spent an entire afternoon stuck on one paragraph, in which I had to get my hero from one spot to another. Just could not find the words to do it.
Finally, in a fit of pure exasperation, I just exploded at myself, "Oh, for pity's sake, just say he walked across the bloody floor!"
It worked too. <g> Which was an object lesson in simple is always best and to avoid over-complicating matters.
LabRat
