From the script:


CLARK
So how mad are you?

LOIS
Not at all.

He stops.

CLARK
Pardon?

LOIS
I'm not mad at all, Clark.

CLARK
Look, don't hold back --

LOIS
I'm not.

He looks at her a second, then --

CLARK
I'm sorry, I was talking to Lois
Lane? You might know her, she was
standing here just a second ago...

LOIS
I'm hurt.

CLARK
Oh.

(CONTINUED)

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LOIS
Really, _really_ hurt.

CLARK
This is gonna be worse than mad,
isn't it?
(she turns and walks)
Okay, I've been rehearsing for
months, let's see if I can get it
right:
(he stops her) (X)
Lois, I know this is a shock and I (X)
wanted to be the one to tell (X)
you... so you could understand how (X)
hard this has been... how long (X)
I've carried this secret by myself (X)
and how much I wanted to tell you, (X)
but... when I decided to become
Superman, I --

LOIS
-- became a target, so anyone close
to you would be a target, and then
it got more complicated when you
realized you loved me --

CLARK
-- which was about two minutes
after I met you --

LOIS
-- don't try and score points --

CLARK
-- sorry.

LOIS
I get all the reasoning, I really
do, it's logical, it's even
thoughtful but when you get right
down to it, you made me believe you
were two people and you did it by
lying and that makes me wonder if I
even _know_ you and that hurt me
and you know what?
(realizing)
I _am_ mad.


There are 1 or 2 things that are similar, but I personally don't see anything lifted besides the similar 'I thought I was talking to Lois Lane' said by Clark and then, of course, Lois going through the logical part of him not telling her. But really, come on, it's fan fiction. There is supposed to be similar stuff from the show.

JD


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