The only bit that looked even similar to a script, to me, was this bit:

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"Clark, I'm not mad. I realize you
have your reasons for not telling me. In fact, some of the ones I've come up with make good sense. I mean, if I knew, I'd automatically become a target, someone else to use to get to Superman. And before you got to know me, I was just another reporter who would stop at nothing to get the Superman story. It makes perfect sense."
That reminded me of Lois's "I'm not mad, I'm hurt" speech at the beginning of WHALTTA... but I'd hardly call it "lifted word for word."

But this is fanfic, and people have made those same points in one form or another hundreds and hundreds of time... so I wouldn't sweat it.

PJ
who, incidentally, has never understood the whole "if she knows, she'll be a target" theory; hello, duh! she was already a target! dizzy

"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."

--Stardust, Caroline K