Hi Paul,

Thoroughly enjoyed this! I loved the way that Beta 'fixed' the epiosde, and all the Beta's comments were spot on. Your story had me rotflol , so thank you very much. The Mary Sue realisation at the end was perfect! wink

Loriel

"Inappropriate attachment" didn't begin to cover the depth of the feelings Vaughn had for Sydney Bristow.
~Ties That Bind by RJ Anderson~

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