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Here is the next part: Revive

I figured making you all wait was needlessly cruel
Hope you all enjoy ^_^

Thank you! Thank you!

Whew! Soooo glad Clark was there so quickly, and WOW! Epic save, Superman!

Looking forward to the next installment!!

-Bek

Comments? Like OMG! Comments? He saved her. Of course, he would save her. But the way you said Clark remembered Melissa throwing petals at his wedding. Awe. He saved her even though he knew it would hurt him. I love how Bill took charge after everything. So happy Clark was close by. Looking forward to more.

This chapter is absolutely awesome. I've read it three times already. I loved how he saved her, regardless of what that meant for him. Now I'm kind of hoping he'll get a little TLC from Lois. Can't wait for the next part

SuperBek -- Thanks ^_^ Glad you liked Clark's save

CarrieRene -- I think Bill is my favorite side character to write. I really wish Henderson had been as big in the show as he had been in the old 50's Superman. Admittedly, that's who I picture when I write him (though his family is different here).

bakasi -- TLC is up....

Glad you all enjoyed, thanks again

Okay, I can start breathing again. Quick, strong Kal-El saved Melissa. It must have been difficult for Henderson, being a police officer, friend and most of all frightened father. Glad to see Bernie show up as quickly as he did. Does the gentle scientist ever get a break?