An intriguing setup. And thanks for the refresher on the events in your earlier story. I know I had read it and enjoyed it, but the details were a little fuzzy in my mind.
Thanks for being willing to consider a different title. My first thought upon reading this section was, "The Fallout." Unfortunately, it might prove too close to another story that is out there -- the archive has a story called simply, "Fallout" (without a definite article.) If I can come with anything else, I'll let you know.
Looking forward to part 2.
Joy,
Lynn
