This is so much happier than the previous story, and yes so much more satisfying.

Poor Clark, I just wanted to give him a hug. The scene driving to the hospital was a nice touch that cabdriver was very empathic.

Lois really wanted HIM, not the guy in the blue and red tights, but HIM. Scardino didn't stand a chance. Personally, Alaska is not far enough, how about the back end of the moon? laugh

Despite Perry's not being there, his presence is felt with his concern for both Lois and Clark. I love that man!

As always a job well done!

Looking forward to Specimen S! After I come back from a little RnR. What is your posting schedule?


Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.