Okay, I rashly promised CC a gushing post, and it's about time I delivered on it.
) was an excellent way to show the differences between the Loises. Yes, as you showed earlier in the story, Lois couldn't have used it. But Lane, whose experiences were so different, could. As Tank said, it was perfectly in character for the Lois Lane of the alt-world whom you'd given us in this story.
And poor Elena's husband has been murdered once again!
Loved the scene in the hospital, for all sorts of reasons. Alt-Clark fussing over Lane. The utterly
fantastic conversation between the two Clarks, which they really needed to have, and which was perfect. Poor Henderson's confusion, and Alt-Clark's attempt to save the day but getting so baffled by Henderson's failure to understand how Clark Kent and Superman could be there together.
Wendy
(now deleting a story with some similarities to this one from her hard drive, since it couldn't hope to compare with this one)
