I went back and read teh whole story after I read the ending, just like I said I would. I am very impressed. This story is very powerful, and it really gives a lot of background to why Lois married Alt Clark.

I liked the fact that the two Lois and two Clarks could easily tell each other apart, and I especially liked how the two Loises have different blood types.

My only problem with the whole story was that Lois had a gun. However, that is an immensely personal problem of mine.

All in all, this story was wonderful. I thought it was a perfect compliment to the first story in the series!

Laura "The Yellow Dart" U. (Alicia U. on the archive)

"A hero is an ordinary individual who finds the strength to persevere and endure in spite of overwhelming obstacles." -- Christopher Reeve