First off, what a cliffhanger!
I so want to know what Clark wrote.
As far as feedback goes: the words just seem to flow, riveting me to the screen, making me want to know more.
I love your style, your story-telling. I love to see everything through Lois' eyes and I hate it
(especially when I know something interesting is happening with Clark & Superman). But I exert patience because I know - sooner or later - Clark'll fess up.
So, to quit my rambling and repeat myself: Love it, curious to know what Clark wrote, trying to be patient until the next chapter hits the boards.
~Sira
