Interesting sequel, CC.
I have to admit I had problems dealing with Lois marrying Alt Clark and then leaving him in the first part of the story, It still bothers me. As a result, I don't sympathize with her concern over her pregnancy.
On the other hand, I find Alt Lois really fiesty and I am charmed by the way you have her sticking with Clark even though she'd like to get a place of her own.
I'll definitely keep reading...
gerry
