You say that Dr. Friskin's Letter is closer to the writing that you have done in the past; when I read the story I was thinking how much smoother and more natural it was than your first fic. The first one was well written, but it still felt like it was coming from a new writer. This one felt like it was coming from someone who had been writing fanfic for years.
I look forward to watching your development as a writer in this fandom. I love well-written stories, so I am very happy that you decided to join us.
