Firstly, a general comment. My 19yo son happened to glance over my shoulder when I was reading the FDK. He saw:-
I promise not to bite you.
(Terry)
I'd even share my worms on a plate with you.
(Kathy)
He really needs to look up the words 'concubine' and 'leash'
(Michael)
(Artemis).
Suffice to say my son now has more than a few questions regarding these strange people called FoLCS!!
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re your comment on pacing. I find pacing to be the toughest part of writing a budding relationship ... too quick and it seems improbable (and you miss opportunities for little moments along the way), too slow and everyone loses interest.
I really appreciate that you think it is moving along well.
Emma Lois must be gaining a new apprecaition for life on earth too. Surely if she were to go back she would treasure what they have there so much more. Not possession-wise, but in terms of attitudes and behaviour - and hope!
You know, I hadn't actually thought about this, but you make a great point.
I'm glad you've got Kal out of that black suit
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and into something more modest!
Thanks for all your lovely FDK, Emma.
Michael
A little research for Kal ... uhmm.
Thanks for all the amazing FDK, Michael.
Artemis More coming as soon as I can get Part 15 to Iolanthe.
Thanks for your FDK.
Thanks everyone,
Corrina.