Firstly, a general comment. My 19yo son happened to glance over my shoulder when I was reading the FDK. He saw:-

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I promise not to bite you.
(Terry)

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I'd even share my worms on a plate with you.
(Kathy)

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He really needs to look up the words 'concubine' and 'leash'
(Michael)

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Tan koo.
(Artemis).

Suffice to say my son now has more than a few questions regarding these strange people called FoLCS!!
smile1 re your comment on pacing. I find pacing to be the toughest part of writing a budding relationship ... too quick and it seems improbable (and you miss opportunities for little moments along the way), too slow and everyone loses interest.

I really appreciate that you think it is moving along well.

Emma

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Lois must be gaining a new apprecaition for life on earth too. Surely if she were to go back she would treasure what they have there so much more. Not possession-wise, but in terms of attitudes and behaviour - and hope!
You know, I hadn't actually thought about this, but you make a great point.

I'm glad you've got Kal out of that black suit eek and into something more modest!

Thanks for all your lovely FDK, Emma.

Michael

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That's the idea
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A little research for Kal ... uhmm. wink

Thanks for all the amazing FDK, Michael.

Artemis More coming as soon as I can get Part 15 to Iolanthe.

Thanks for your FDK.


Thanks everyone,

Corrina.