You posted another part! Thank you! These boards have been MUCH too quiet lately, and your story has been such fun to read.
I was a little disappointed that Lois lost her memories so quickly but at least she got them back. Also, I realize your story was written in first person but after a while I got tired of seeing the word "I." Not meant as criticism, just my inital reaction in going through the story.
I am looking forward to part 4.
