cookiesmom Thank you for your FDK.
When I was writing the story I changed into third person several times when it had to be first person ... I'm glad you like the story.
HappyGirl Thank you for leaving FDK! I always liked the idea of an emotional bond between Lois and Clark.
So why does Clark have a different reaction here than he did in the show?
Lois risked her own life to help him that shows him she has discovered what a slimeball her 'fiance' is.
Michael Thank you!
Part 4 will be up soon. Perhaps tomorrow depending on how tired I am when I come home.
