My goodness, you do like to leave us sitting on the edges of our seats. I hope you post soon, so I don't topple onto the floor!
I love Clark's musing on intimacy with Mayson- it really explains him well. It also helps bring out the tension already lacing the story.
It's also perfect to have Lois witnessing Clark's unease in going into the bedroom. I think it subconsciously mirrors her own unease.
Great job! Post more soon please?
