Bethy, I've just finished both parts - this was wonderful! notworthy I just loved it! The fact that Perry makes up Elvis stories on the spot (what a great idea cool ), Lois reaching out to Martha for advice (and how sneaky Martha was, too wink ), and then her going to Clark's.

Thank you for writing the scene at Clark's, too. It was absolutely lovely - I am so glad that we were able to share these moments with them. Poor Clark was so clueless as Lois bursts in on him. I loved this...

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“Lois, I don’t understand.”

“I know you don’t,” she said, frustrated. “I’m getting there.” What was wrong with him? Didn’t he know he was supposed to read her mind, figure out exactly what she was talking about and swoop her up and kiss her?
And just one more beautifully waffy moment... [Linked Image]
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“I don’t know what brought this about,” he said, “but I don’t think I care.” With a deft motion, he flipped her so she was sitting on his lap and he followed what had been the most extraordinary kiss she’d ever experienced with one even more beautiful.

Because in the midst of this one he murmured, “I love you, Lois.”
::very big happy sigh:: Believe me, it worked...

KathyM

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