Good idea!! (if your best friend is Clark, that is <G>)
I love this part, Bethy. It's sooooooooooooo wonderful!! Wow I don't know what else to write. Maybe some quotes will help me.
Lois didn’t allow herself to think as she parked her jeep and hurried towards Clark’s door. If she allowed herself to think, she’d probably come up with some reason to back out of doing this and she didn’t want to back out.
Doubt assailed her as she lifted her hand to knock. What if he thought she was crazy? What if he laughed in her face? What if he was only interested in being friends? What if he--
The door opened.
“How do you feel about me?” she blurted.
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“I know you don’t,” she said, frustrated. “I’m getting there.” What was wrong with him? Didn’t he know he was supposed to read her mind, figure out exactly what she was talking about and swoop her up and kiss her?
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Anyway, this story was terrific and I hope you write something else soon.
AnnaBtG.
