Awwwwwwwww! Bethy, that was so sweet. I love the conversation with Martha smile . I also really liked how Jonathan was so nice to her on the phone -- must have been a total shock for poor Lois. And the smoochie scene . . . awwwwwwwwwwww! I am so glad you decided to add it. I think it would have worked very well if you would have ended with Lois deciding to go see Clark, but I love the smoochie scene laugh .

I hope you write a lot more soon. Maybe a story about knobtailed geckos wink ?

- Laura laugh

Laura "The Yellow Dart" U. (Alicia U. on the archive)

"A hero is an ordinary individual who finds the strength to persevere and endure in spite of overwhelming obstacles." -- Christopher Reeve