Great part, Taivas! I wouldn't worry too much about the lengths of the posts. I, for one, like the long ones, especially after long waits between parts.
Lucy's a fun character. She's incredulous that somebody is working with Lois and hasn't run screaming in the other direction. Plus, she seems to have the ability to make Lois see what her own feelings are, even using a bit of jealousy to bring them out.
Lois, fortunately, isn't damaged so she isn't freaked out that Clark spent the night at her apartment. She even winds up liking it.
More soon!
