Thank you all for sharing with me your comments. I wasn't sure if my "elseworld" rewrite would be well received or not.
I want to give special thanks to Labrat who catches all of my grammatical mistakes, and points out to me when there are holes in my plot.
If you have any suggestions on the story, I will love to hear them. I'm sorry if it took to long. I am working on Part 9 now.
A final question: was the post too long? Should I have broken it up into two posts, or is this fine?
-- Taivas
