Taivas, this just gets better and better! I really love what you're doing with this scenario. Apart from the differences between Lois and Clark here and the way they were in the series, I love the way you're making subtle changes to the Pilot. That conversation between Lois and Clark after meeting Baines is a perfect example. Now, Clark's comment about hre age and attractiveness makes
sense!
I
adored the Clark/Lucy/Lois scenes. Just terrific!
And overall... well, I just want
MORE!! Wendy