Carol
I just thought of this when you said you fixed the time line problem and that Aunt Louise lost her fiance in WWI. It is unlikely that Children Services would give 2 teenage children to an 87 year old relative to raise. For her to have been engaged in WWI she would have to have been born at about 1900 since WWI ended in 1917. Lois' father would have been a child or adolescent in WWII so Aunt Louise losing her fiance in WWII makes more sense.
I will now shut up about this. It is just timeline problems really bug me.
Again great story. This will definitely go on my list of all time favorites.
