I've done something I never do which is to start reading a story that isn't finished. That being said I've come across a timeline problem. I don't remember which two sections are involved but I'm sure you will know. Near the beginning of the story you say Aunt Louise's fiance died on Iwo Jima (that is WWII). Later you say he died in WWI. Just thought I would point out this so it could be fixed before the story is finished and goes to the archive.
It is a great story, wonderfully written and I look forward to future installments.
