Have so little time for feedback, but... wow, Shayne! Your Lois Lane is living on our world? In the ordinary, there-are-no-superheroes and men-can't-fly and there-is-war-in-Iraq world? And she got the name of Lois Lane just because her parents were into a fantasy figure named Superman? And Clark lives in the world of LnC, wherever that might be, where men like him can indeed fly, except there is no Lois there, and Clark is involved with Lana? And then Clark is somehow transported to our world? And the military in our world want to shoot him down for saving an airplane, because they think he is a terrorist?
Oh, wow! What a situation! I just have to wonder, why was Clark transported to our world? Could it possibly be because he needs to be where Lois is, and in this fic she is in the "ordinary" world, not in the world of LnC?
Fantastic! Like the others said, I do hope you will continue.
Ann