Welcome to the Boards, Beth. Unlike Ann I'm probably the one person here who thinks that Clark was right keeping his secret for so long
. But I think that's pretty much the only thing we disagree about.
But let's get to your story. I like the premise very much, even though I would agree with Ann here that the chapter is quite short. But a big YAY for the cliffhanger. I loved your last few sentences. They were powerful, especially the "never in the history of english language" - one. I can't quote here, because something about my PC is not right at the moment. Sorry about that.
I love Top Copy and I'm very curious which changes you made. Come back with more soon, Beth! Way to go!
