I feel guilty answering the feedback, but DJ was adamant before she left that I had to do it. All the stuff you guys liked so much - that's all DJ. I might have tweaked a word or two, but it's her story and her cliffhanger.
On behalf of DJ, I want to thank everyone who has replied. I'm sure she'll have lots more to say when she gets back next week.
Like everyone else, I'm just waiting for part 12...