I am really enjoying reading this! Everything flows and its wonderfully written. I also like how Jonathon weighed his options. I see he takes after his father more than his mother! wink

I have one question though. Why did he yell out about the heat vision? For all he knew, the gunmen could think that maybe Superman was hanging out outside somewhere. The super heat-up could have been explained away. But I guess that wasn't really the point of your story, was it?

I can't wait to see how Lois and Clark handle all of this. Poor Clark having to take a call like that. And to have someone deliver the message that your wife "had an affair", that must have been hard on that man too!

I'll be looking for the next part!

~Kristen

Joey: If he doesn't like you, then this is all just a moo point.
Rachel: A moo point?
Joey: Yeah, it's like a cow's opinion, you know, it just doesn't matter. It's "moo."
Rachel: Have I been living with him for too long, or did that all just make sense?