) Anyway, it be neater and easier for me to find the chapters if they were all under one title. Or you could even have a unifying prefix, like so:
(Umbrella Title)I : FlashBacks
(Umbrella TItle)II: The Longest Five Minutes
Just my 2 cents.
This is superbly written, btw.
Man, I can't believe thoughts take so much space and time to express in words.
You haven't read Masques, have you?
