This was great! I, too, would definitely read about Lois's visit to Tank, except that I'm not sure he'd have the strength of character that Sue showed with Clark.

And having H. G. Wells be responisble for the resolution? Brilliant! I never, never saw that one coming! Absolutely a Kerth-quality story! Funny, touching, and sneakily mind-altering. Now I've got to get rid of my latest Lois-Clark-never-get-together work in progress and come up with something nice and sweet. I sure don't want a visit from Lex or Tempus.


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